1. I decided to choose my Natural Scientific final draft in Unit 3 for the revised revisions because I was really proud of the final product and of the way that I distributed the topic, I was able to think outside of the box and create an essay about something that is not real and I found it very fun to write. For my revision, I decided to add a method and a result paragraph which I was missing when I first submitted it. I fixed my subheadings and wrote them the way that it was supposed to be written and I fixed the headers. I also added more information about the topic to try and make it more interesting and more information about the Unicorns that were found on Mars. 
2. For Unit 1, I would add more information about my article because I think I left it too short and I would have written it in a different format that would make it more realistic like many that I saw from my peers which all looked amazing. For Unit 2, I was really proud of the way that I wrote it because even though it was not an actual Instagram post I tried my hardest to make it look realistic. Like the professor suggested I would add more criticism instead of just giving an overview of the show. For Unit 4, At first, I was a little disappointed because I could’ve done better but I lacked, and I also struggled with what to write about but at the end, it wasn’t as hard as I was thinking and it did not come out as bad as I thought. If I could revise it I would put more information about Fordham and people’s behaviors, but I struggled with how it would fit in.                                          *Down below I attached my projects from Unit 1-4*Unit 1  

Nanyeli Veras

Scientific Draft – Nanyeli Veras

Final Draft Unit 4